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Scourge *SPOILERS ALERT*

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Two will become 1... Tiger and Lion will meet in battle... and Blood will rule the forest.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

You have a strange style, that's for sure. Although I like it. Okay, now onto the critique part...

What are those lines in Scourge's fur? I like how you made his eye glow. His claws on his front paw is a bit too long. The tail also looks too short.

The background is...okay. What are those lights, though? Lights from buildings? Are they cat eyes? Also, you're writing is too hard to read. Maybe try normal text with a neat font next time.

I've also been watching you. You ARE improving greatly. Keep drawing and improving. Good luck.

Sincerely,
MossfireX