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Charm Adoptable One: OPEN by Azuriite

:icongriffin-kitten:
I see you got a new style. The ears look like chinchilla ears. :T
Ok, I don't want to offend you, remember this is for the sake of improvement.

The stomach looks like it's uber fat. It's dragging on the ground. The hind leg is jacked up, too. :|

THE TAIL.
The butt looks like it's vomitting up a huge tail. it's WAY too fat. XD

The neck is a tad fat, just try to bring it in a little...
I really LOVE your coloring and how fluid it all looks! But you need to do some shading. YOUR EYES ARE AMAZING.

Start using anatomy, it'll help your art so much! <3 Love you! ;3
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